Today I was learning about how to write a recount about what I was doing in lockdown. I wrote about when I was doing some exercise by going to a walk around the block. Something that I found easy to do was remember what happened and all of the stepps that I did. Something that I found hard to do was make sure that I had enough descriptive words in my writing. I found it easy to remember what I was doing because I went for the walk the day before I wrote the piece of writing.
I hope you enjoy my writing and what is something that I could have done better?
Sounds like a great day in your bubble. I really enjoyed reading your recount Riria. I like the way you used descriptive words to paint a picture in the reader's mind...
ReplyDeleteNext time you could level up by adding some photos of you and your whānau going for a walk.
Keep up the fantastic mahi.
Good job Riria it was very cool i liked reading a lot!
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