Today we were learning about how you could make a piece of writing that explains the picture and other features it has to it.My writing was about a animal that could heal and survive the most painful injuries during its life time.It was a very fun piece of writing to make because you had to think really hard about what features and other things like what the animal even is. During the writing sessions that we have had we made an animal a piece of writing and a platform about what our creature was and like what defining features it had to it.Something that I found easy to do was to talk about all of the cool things about my creature in my writing that I did after the picture and the starting platform. Something that I found hard to do during that time was creating the mythical/fantasy creature because I had to make antlers and then to make wings then to connect them to the body.Today I found making the writing and planning out what I was going to do with the my animal.
What is something that you think I could have done to make my writing or my creature better than what I already have?
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