Brownie's
Today we were learning about how to make writing about our favorite food but also writing a recount about it to. So today we were basically writing a recount about when we had our favorite food and describing it but also,making it sound like we were there eating it at that same time. Something that I found easy to do was add descriptive language in my writing because I had imagined in my head that I was sitting there eating it while I was writing,so that helped me alot during that piece of writing. Something that I found hard to do was write more words that made you readers get the picture about what,I was writing about.
What is one thing that you liked about my writing or could improve on next time?
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