We were learning about... How this ship named the Rena had crashed and it had lots of oil on it.Then all of the oil spilt into the sea and killed sea birds and marina life.And at the end we had to make a poster about how bad the plastic and rubbish is.
I enjoyed... making the poster and poliling the turttle.It was easy to polyline the turtle because the picture was easy to polyline and the shapes on it the turtle were easy to do.
I found it easy to... remember how the storey went and then to put it in my own words. And it was easier to remember the storey because i read it over and over again.
I found it hard to... spell all the words right and to come up with what i was gonna do for my poster.
Next time I will... Make my poster my interesting because i thought it was a bit plane with what i did.
Hi Riri I like the way you used quality stems of what you where learning about,enjoying what you liked,what you found easy,what you found hard and Next time what you would do in your writing and I also liked the way you answered your questions in a full sentence about what happened when the rena crashed and talked about where it crashed.And also I like the way you polylined your turtle.But next time talk about why you made your poster about the sea and what happened to the marine life to it.And also next time skip your slide on the 8 slide because when we press on the link it here button it well just lead us back to this slide so you could fix it up and done.Sorry I made this to long to read compared to the one you did to me but I just wanted to tell you what I liked and what you should do next time when you do a follow up questions so ya bye Rira. By Stephanie.
ReplyDeletethanks for your enthusiastic question stphanie
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